Scene One

Scene One-The Beginning


[Random dates begin to appear and fade away on the screen, as such:]

February 12, 1809: Abraham Lincoln is born in Hardin County, Kentucky... (Picture of Kentucky)
November 6, 1860: Abraham Lincoln is elected as the President of the United States of America... (This Picture)
April 14, 1865: Abraham Lincoln is assassinated by John Wilkes Booth at Ford Theater... (This Picture)
April 15, 1865 - President Abraham Lincoln dies at 7:22 in the morning

Or does he...

Narrator: Abraham Lincoln's assassination... A tragic event I'm sure we all are very familiar with, but the story you have been told in your history classes, textbooks, maybe even on television…those are all are lies. The government's sugarcoated version of Lincoln's assassination doesn't even scratch the surface of what really happened. Very recently, we discovered that the story of Lincoln's assassination was actually a government conspiracy. Their version of his assassination could not be further from the truth... This is the true story of Lincoln's “assassination”.

[Opening stuff, then scene fades in showing a car driving slowly into the back entrance of the theatre while playing Godfather type music]

[An unknown man with a trench coat comes out of the car and is greeted by two other men. You can't make out who these men are, the one with the trench coat then opens his trunk and grabs two bags, he then hands a bag to the two other men. They then proceeds to enter through the back of the building]

[The Lincolnator logo appears on the screen with the Godfather music reaching its peak.]

[Another car pulls up to the theater and President Abe Lincoln steps out and he looks up to the sky and puts on his hat slowly; he then helps his wife and kids out of the car. The kids excitedly jump out of the car because they are hyped to see the play so they run towards the entrance]

Mary: Children! Don't run, wait for us! They never listen do they, let's go honey.
Lincoln: You go ahead and catch up with Tad; I have to pick up a program.
Mary: Ok, I'll see you inside.

[They give each other a kiss and Mrs. Lincoln walks off as Abe goes to buy a program.]

[The camera follows Abe as he walks up to the vendor and buys a program and when the man hands him the program gun shots are heard from inside the theater. Abe becomes worried about his wife instantly.]

Lincoln: .......My...family! MY FAMILY!

[Lincoln springs up and runs into the theater to see hundreds of bodies lying all over the place. Abe then pulls out a gun and he starts looking around for his family.]

[Lincoln continues on his search until he hears yelling from an upstairs room, he quickly runs up and peaks in to see the two formerly mentioned men with machine guns aiming them at about ten people, including his family. Lincoln then pauses to check his ammo only to find out he only has one shot left, so he decides to go for it and he runs into the room shooting one of the men and roundhouse kicking the other through the window.]

Tad: DAD, YOU SAVED US!
Mary: Oh, Abe!

[The whole family hugs each other and the other people celebrate what just happened]

Lincoln: Was that all of them?
Guy 1: No, I saw another one in the other side of the building.
Lincoln: DAMN!
Guy 2: What should we do?
Lincoln: ......I can handle this.....

[Abe nods to the people to tell them to leave and he goes to the other side of the building. The camera shows the people running out of the building to the police officers and fire men.]

Guy 3: Help!
Woman 1: Help us!
Cop: Is there anyone in there alive?
Guy 2: Yeah, the guy that saved our lives he killed two of them, but he and the other killer are still in there.
Fire Man: Who was the man that saved you?
Guy 2: ....President Abe Lincoln!
Cop: ...MY GOODNESS...WE HAVE TO GET IN THERE TO HELP!

[The camera then goes back to Abe fighting through rubble and debris to get to the other side of the building, he then gets to the door and busts it down and enters.]

Lincoln: Hello, whose here!
Booth: ....Hello Abe...I saw what you did to those two men in the other room, very impressive. But those men were only level 3's, I am a far more advanced with better techniques such as my wave dashing abilities. But that is beside the point; the point is...that you’re going to die!
Lincoln: ...Who...who said that! Who are you?
Booth: ...I, Abe, am your assassin!
Lincoln: ....

[There is a Dramatic pause and Lincoln hears a noise and he turns around quickly and Booth fires but misses completely. Lincoln then runs towards Booth but Booth does a flip over him and stands up to Lincolns face.]

Booth: Knock, Knock!
Lincoln: Uh… Who’s there?
Booth: SLAP! (Slaps Lincoln)

Lincoln: OH HELL NAW!
Booth: ....oh hell yes!

[Lincoln and Booth both jump up, and become suspended in mid-air. [Fast rock music starts playing] While up in the air, Booth rips open his trench coat and pulls out 2 shotguns from holsters, aims them directly at Lincoln but Abe kicks both guns out of Booth's hands and into his, he then aims for Booth and shoots wildly. Lincoln then drops to the ground and looks up to see that Booth is unharmed and that Lincoln has missed him completely]

Lincoln: ...What the hell are you!
Booth: ...your worst nightmare!

[Booth throws a smoke bomb at the ground and escapes.]

[The movie freezes and fades to black, as you hear Booth saying "You cannot escape me..."]

I'm bored so i thought i'd critique the first scene. It is probably the best one of the 7 but still...

• "The Lincolnator logo appears..." lol wtf
  
• The scene makes it seem like there are two children. Lincoln only had one.
  
• Kissing scene ftl
  
• "...and roundhouse kicking the other through the window." Yeah...
  
• "....Hello Abe...I saw what you did to those two men in the other room, very impressive. But those men were only level 3's, I am a far more advanced with better techniques such as my wave dashing abilities. But that is beside the point; the point is...that you’re going to die!" LOL!!!! IF THAT GETS CUT...I WOULD BE PISSED. But seriously that line is a little weird...
  
• "Lincoln springs up and runs into the theater to see hundreds of bodies lying all over the place." Okay, yeah probably would be cool to have 100...but lol yeah just thought i'd note that i'm going to change it to like 10 because it's not possible, and because i'm anal and it's gonna bother me.
  
• "...but Booth does a flip over him and stands up to Lincolns face." I would say this is impossible and needs to be changed but lol idk what is happening ..."Stands up to Lincoln's face"?
  
• "[Lincoln and Booth both jump up, and become suspended in mid-air. [Fast rock music starts playing] While up in the air, Booth rips open his trench coat and pulls out 2 shotguns from holsters, aims them directly at Lincoln but Abe kicks both guns out of Booth's hands and into his, he then aims for Booth and shoots wildly. Lincoln then drops to the ground and looks up to see that Booth is unharmed and that Lincoln has missed him completely]" Wow...just wow.
  
• Also, this scene is the first scene I understand but still we have 14 characters introduced...not including the "100 bodies". All i'm saying is that maybe we could cut one or two of the like "Guy 1, Fireman, Cop etc. Unless of course Guy 1-3, the Cop, and the Fire man are all played by the same person and dressed differently...Cuz in that case its funny, but it might be hard to film...lol if we make it...

Besides these things ^^^^ and some grammatical errors. It's good.

@#$^.